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This girl is a soundtrack of second chances
As real as sunlight or fire smoke
and sharing that same elusive quality
A composition of the future, she will push the wave with Cerulean words
While those of us who would ride this change watch
On and on
Some people are born with the power to change worlds
And I see this in her, hiding behind golden hair and want-sharp eyes
It's a lust face.
Something beyond sex and art and knowledge
She wants her world to knows things as she sees them
See time and space in music and possibility
Of the many notes that are left suspended in this room
between linoleum and fluorescent lights
Hers will frame the second movement
Being creepy in study hall, with some unexpected results.
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brazilnutz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think this Moira is something everyone can get behind...

Truly a great poem.

;)
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phoxymoron Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I forgot you ever wrote this!
you're so sweet, my love. =]
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Lair-Noir Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
I liked this a lot, reminds me of my style of poetry quite a lot :)
And no, that's not why I like it, hehe.
'This girl is a soundtrack of second chances' that's my favorite line and amazing poetry.
Good work, keep it up!
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inkwazsilver Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010   Writer
I'm actually at your gallery on another tab and I really like your poetry too *wink wink* Thank you so much for the reads :)
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Lair-Noir Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
haha, good :P and it's no problem :)
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